Working on rough draft of chapter four in advance.
At one point you descibed yourself as 'tortured, melodramatic, vain and self absorbed'. I don't see you that way at all. I see you not as tortured, but as the victim. Dramatic yes, melodramatic no. Vain, no, just aware of yourself. And as far as self absorbed, no to that, far from it. Self preserving yes.
The other adjectives, tortured, melodramatic, vain and self absorbed, we should save those for the dick bag villain in chapter sixteen.
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